LLAAPPSSEE's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shikuro Collab Tribute]

Keeping the stick fights alive. Yes please. I will forever love them.
Grow strong!
Cool track choice.

Crop better, and upload in better quality! You're work deserves it! :P
But, also, don't listen to me, a lot of my earlier work was .MP3 only. T_T

If you game...check out the game "Your Only Move Is: Hustle"!

Dr4ft-n0t-s4ved responds:

thanks! ^^

for the cropping issue i have trouble screen recording it so a friend did it for me (its a scratch project so i cant export it as a video file)

also i dont have steam lol

[The sad truth about Sonic]

"beast fur" XD

edit response: OHhhh.

monkeygods responds:

"beige" not beast

[WALKMAN "REBUILD"]

Excellent. Got's some Ghost in the Shell vibes in the beginning there. Love how all the parts are in a modelers kit. Cool tunes / sound design too.

PartTimeSeagull responds:

hell yeah dude. i tried getting the first shot to be a 1 for 1 in a way. glad you noticed

[Chapter 1: Obsession]

Upload your art to NG!

SarlechFROST responds:

Will do 😊

[My new YOUTUBE CHANNEL INTRO]

Good slide anim. The jump too. Nice artwork overall. I bet you could make this intro a bit quicker. Particularly with the panning. I could see it being snappier. It would match the fire slide intensity. Instead of a slow pan up when the two characters are in frame.
You could swoosh up (even add some sound effects). Have the logo's fly in as well with a bit of stretch/squash, give'm a little jiggle / momentum as they stop. Hell, get wacky and have one of the logo parts fly in, all spinning, after your boy crashes (throw in some other garbage that flies into too, on the floor, a can rolling out, a ball bouncing out, etc. . . or maybe have stuff related to the channel bouncing along the ground). Maybe the logo hits the other dude in the brainbox, have him itch the sore spot and mean mug his friend as the logo then ricochets to meet the other part of the logo. Would make it worth the minute watch. If not doing any of that. . . bet you could nail this down to ~30 seconds.

Also, you should maybe randomly repeat that blinking anim as the logo comes in. So the smiling dude doesn't look so static.

SarlechFROST responds:

OOOOOHHH THAT'S A GREAT INPUT. I'LL implement this later on. Thank you so much for the feedback. Thank you for the notes.

[RIP IT OUT]

Nice, love the subtle bits of animation and atmosphere. Audio (music / voice) sounds nice as well. Heck yeah!

AntonM responds:

hey thanks Lapse! glad you like it man

[Oscillation]

Cool short. I've always loved that Heisenberg quote. Is that being supposed to be a God of some kind? I dig the music and sound. Keep it up, I can't wait to see some more of of your work!

Snehaaf responds:

glad you liked it.
For me he is not a god, but that doesn't mean he cannot be a god for somebody else :)
Thank you I appreciate it.

[Birth]

This is great, man!

MarcyVF responds:

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[Helix Clouds]

Not bad, I liked the music in the beginning portions. there seemed to have been some throw backs to John Kricfalusi in some of the main characters facial expressions. I liked all the set pieces and little quirky characters.

I think the only bits I didn't like were the text that stated "footprints, someones been here before". I thought it was a little tacky and unnecessary...you are animating, after-all...and I feel that should've been conveyed through the medium. The voice acting was a little subpar and could be spruced up a bit (aside from the owl, that was alright).

SwedishPlumTrees responds:

I am a fan of John K.'s art, so that's a big compliment. Thanks! And I will try to get rid of those unnecessary text boxes next time. And yes, the voice acting does indeed need improvement. I will continue to work on it. Thanks again for the feedback :).

[The Kirby Collab]

Gustavo's first Segment

Hilarious.

..the face..god the..face..

FlashfireEX responds:

Love that face.